The verdict is in: Peter Chen, Graphic Design Certificate
student from California, USA, is the winner of the
Urban Word NYC winter design competition!
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| Peter Chen's winning designclick
here to see all of his final
pieces |
The project was ambitious: Students were asked
to design a full suite of promotional and marketing
materials for the 6th Annual Teen Poetry Slam, an
eleven-day event produced by the New York-based
non-profit organization Urban Word.
The competition unfolded in several stages. First,
the 120 competition entrants were asked to design
a logo and postcard. A deluge of creative entries
flooded in, and five entrants with outstanding submissions
were selected as finalists.
Each finalist received a round of feedback from
the client and Sessions Faculty members, then
competed against a tight deadline to produce the
winning solution. That's when the real work began.
Here's the story of how Peter
Chen won the Urban Word design competition:
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One: The Five Finalists |
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Five design competition Finalists were selected
by a panel of Sessions Faculty and by a
team at Urban Word.
As the Finalist page shows, the Teen Poetry
Slam event inspired some very creative and diverse
responses. Even at that stage, Peter's work
stood out because of the very strong logo treatment.
As Peter said: "I was trying to express
an event whose spirit is urban and gritty, but
also exuberant and poetic. And I wanted to make
sure that the postcard went along with the identity
of Urban Word NYC—it had to make sense
with the look of their Web site."
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Peter's
first postcard design had great potential... |
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and
nabbed him a place among the five finalists. |
"The logo was so bold, says Jen Weiss,
the Director of Urban Word NYC. "It was
like a stamp: you could take it out of the postcard,
put it on a sticker or a flyer or anywhere,
and it would completely encapsulate the spirit
of the event all on its own, with no need for
other images or even for color." K-Swift,
Urban Word's events coordinator, adds, "We
loved the figure of the poet inside the A. It
just makes the logo so memorable."
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The logo seen here
features an illustration of a poet—
in the next revision, this would change...
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| Round
Two: Back to the Drawing Board |
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Even with all this positive feedback, Peter still
needed to go back to the drawing board and make
revisions. "We wanted to see if he could shake
up his design on the postcard a bit, says Weiss,
"make it more bold. The Teen Poetry Slam isn't
a conservative event at all—it's very in-your-face,
and we wanted to make sure the postcard had that
feeling."
Peter's second submission definitely achieved this
goal. He enlarged the logo and image, adding diagonal
elements to make the composition more dynamic. He
also broke apart the logo from the image of the
poet on the right, fulfilling another one of the
client's requests: "We wanted the logo to stand
alone and not be dependent on that image for recognition,"
says Jen. The integrity of Peter's logo was clear
even when separated from the image. It could stand
alone on the strength of the type choices Peter
had made.
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Round
2: a bolder, more dynamic postcard.... |
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and he
separated the logo from the illustration. |
Along with the revised postcard, Peter submitted
his poster and sticker designs. These showed how
well he was able to translate his original vision
to these other pieces. "The finalists are all
at a level of craft where they are able to create
a cohesive look between pieces," says Sessions
Faculty member Nomi Altabef. "Peter did this
and also added ingenuity to his new pieces, using
the extra space of the poster to include thumbnail
images mapping the location of each slam event."
That especially caught the client's eye. "Not
only was it informative, says Jen, "but the
way it looked really reinforced the NYC vibe, which
is so important to the event and to the organization
as a whole."
The sticker presented another unique challenge,
because the client wanted the sticker to serve two
functions: to convey the branding of the Teen Poetry
Slam and, more importantly, to represent the Urban
Word NYC organization as a whole. The Urban Word
NYC logo had to be prominently featured. Fortunately
Peter had done his homework and made sure that his
work fit with the already-established look of Urban
Word NYC as shown on the client's Web
site.
| Round
Three: Some Client Concerns |
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In the course of making many vast improvements,
the changes also raised some new concerns with the
client. "He added the wire fence, which was
this great diagonal that made the composition work
really well, but we were worried that the fence
made it look like the poet was on some kind of military
base," comments Jen. Compounding that concern
were some problems with the image: "In the
image of the poet he used, there was no microphone,
no evidence that this was an image of a spoken-word
performance—it just looked like an angry youth
with his fist in the air."
These two elements took the design too far from
its goal: communicating the idea of a competitive
poetry event. Jen explained, "As an urban youth
organization, we really have to be sensitive to
this—it's crucial that we make it clear we're
an organization that promotes creativity and community
through performance. We didn't want it just to look
like he was shouting; it had to be clear that he
was performing."
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Four: Back to the Drawing Board (again!) |
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Peter was presented with the client's concerns
and asked to make more revisions, and for a moment
he felt completely swamped. "I understood what
the client was saying, and I had even wondered about
those same issues, but felt like I was going to
have to redo my whole design, and I just didn't
know how I could possibly begin again after I'd
come so far." Working under extreme time pressure—only
one day to submit the revisions—Peter showed
problem-solving skills that will take him far in
his career. "He came back with such strong
solutions, we were really impressed," says
Jen Weiss. Rather than scrap the image, he simply
added a microphone to it, and swapped the wire fence
for an image of the Brooklyn Bridge. "I tried
to keep the same diagonal element, says Peter, "but
go for something that was more quintessential New
York." Bingo—it came together exactly
as the client hoped, and elevated the design to
a much higher level of communication.
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| Here
is the complete suite of productsa few
minor text changes, and then they go to print! |
What does Peter have to look forward to now? Four
more hectic days of finalizing the designs before
the work goes to print. And then, of course, there
will be the excitement every designer treasures:
seeing his work in printed form. "Thank you
for choosing me!" Peter told the client. "I'm
so excited to work with you on the Teen Poetry Slam.
Having previously worked with urban youth, this
project has special meaning to me."
We will be posting photos of the final pieces once
printed, so check back to this page. For now, congratulations
to Peter Chen!